the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may e unhealthy if eaten too much.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams illustrate the mean proportions of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in american daily diets like breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks.
Overall, sodium composition is consumed the most in dining meal whilst added sugar is high percentage in snacks. And breakfast has the similar proportion of the three mentioned nutrients in the United State.
It is clear that dinner diet accounts for sodium as the highest percentage, around 43%; followed by figures of saturated fat and added sugar, with 37% and 23%, respectively. By contrast, in american lunch, sodium and saturated fat occupy of similarity amount, roughly 29% and 26%, orderly whilst added sugar figure is merely 19%.
Turning to composition of these nutrition in snacks in the US, added sugar proportion accounts for over two-fifth and doubles its amount of saturated fat, with 21% as well as three-fold sodium contribution. In contradictory, while saturated fat and added sugar percentages are even in the morning diet, with 16%, the sodium figure is 2% slightly lower, around 14%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75214727528 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8208241706 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289992842442 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194483387121 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201866276905 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023703673468 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278373145087 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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