Can online education be compatible with a traditional one
These days online classes have become popular. studying at your own pace, saving money and being comfortable are some of the advantages of these classes. students today are no longer in need to attend schools. As a matter of fact, they can simply study from where they are. while the use of online class may sound as a good idea for some, for others it is not.
the use of online courses can help students learn comfortably.Unlike the old times where students were forced to attend their classes every morning, students now can learn from any place they want and without a problem. Students can even learn in their pajamas while they are lying in bed.Another benefit of online classes is that it helps students learn in a different ways. When students study in an online class, there are different methods they can use to learn .For instance, the use of an actual recording of a certain lecture. Students can ask their professor to record a video of an actual lecture for them or they can even ask for access to supplementary courses like online videos and websites.
Though online courses may offer some good benefits, they are still not right for young students. One of the main challenges of an online course is that it requires a great deal of self discipline, and children are not the ones to do that. Many children would prefer an actual structure of a class where materials are presented and the time is limited. for instance, some young students wont even move if they are not pressured with a limited time.
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| 2019-05-17 | Adam.Mortada | 68 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68656716418 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44264800858 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5443736495 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169784498743 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645986279453 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388402248935 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115170062715 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101835270992 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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