Write a letter to your friend with whom you spent a weekend participating party regarding his relocation to new house. In the letter, you should:
- Describe what you liked the most at their new apartment
- Why did you like the weekend
- When and where do you want to meet them again
Dear Sam
Congratulations on your new home. The house you bought is elegant and modern, it has all tiled flooring with ample space for parking and nice garden with even space for kids play area. I was astonished with architecture design of the entire house. The floor planning have been taken care to tiniest of details.
It was awesome spend weekend at your place. Since all of our friends met each other after long time, it was nostalgic talking about the past. Everyone was having so much fun that we partied for 2 days straight. The celebration would not have been that exciting if we have not plan ahead of time and brought extra drinks for everyone.
Let's meet up next month in August, winter is coming and there will be huge snow which makes it perfect weather for snow skiing at mount Rushmore. we both can bring our families and spend some feast there.
It was nice being there for you when you needed us.
Take care
Yours dearly
Michael
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| 2019-05-18 | amanda.mosby | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam Congratulations on your new home. The ho...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... have been that exciting if we have not plan ahead of time and brought extra drinks ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... brought extra drinks for everyone. Lets meet up next month in August, winter is...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ther for snow skiing at mount Rushmore. we both can bring our families and spend s...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or you when you needed us. Take care Yours dearly Michael
^^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... needed us. Take care Yours dearly Michael
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64912280702 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13675279968 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730994152047 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6174255428 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.25 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152927743341 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572171512454 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727613428844 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112634486072 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968747766656 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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