Students should fund their education with part-time work that they do while they study.
Education is one of the most important aspect of life. Education leads once future in an easy way and makes a person wise. As an individual it is important to take minimum education. Nowadays technology is growing rapidly and to survive daily life technology is used. In order to use technology one has to be minimal educated.
As education is an important aspect a student must highly concentrate. It will be tough if students fund their own education by part-time work while they study. Funding is somthing due to which many people in rural areas do not afford education. If a student does part time and attends his or her classes he or she may not fully concentrate on education which may lead to partial understanding of concepts and this will impact scoring.
If a student is studying computer science course in an reputed university and fund his education by through part-time. It will be really helpful if he does part-time which is based on his course and which is very rare. If he is working in shops, malls etc than it may lead to his education funds but he may will end up understanding partial concepts. Doing part-time in a technical field will be wise, as it will give him real time experience and challenges.
To avoid all the funding clumsy government needs to help students by providing scholarships so that students can happily concentrate on their studies which will help personally and country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ct of life. Education leads once future in an easy way and makes a person wise. As an individu...
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Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in an easy way and makes a person wise. As an individual it is important to take m...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...logy one has to be minimal educated. As education is an important aspect a stud...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...not afford education. If a student does part time and attends his or her classes he or sh...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... is studying computer science course in an reputed university and fund his educati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81224489796 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77324637568 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.560641011 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2142857143 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324978749702 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113069281769 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144964216163 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18713641448 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136780292056 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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