Many people think that it is okay to spend a lot of money in a large wedding. Others argue with it.
Discuss both views and give you opinion.
It is agreed by many that spending huge amount in wedding ceremonies is essential. However, other people do not support his idea. In my opinion, I disagree with the notion and this essay will discuss the reasons behind it.
Nowadays, organizing a wedding is naturally expensive. Since childhood, people have dreamed of making this day as special and as memorable as possible. I think that allotting big budget for a wedding celebration is impractical. People can instead use their money in more important things like opening a business, investing in future funds or purchase a house which they can use after.
Moreover, individuals need to think about saving money for their child's future. They can either open an account for educational plans or buy health insurance. This will surely assist them in their child's college expenses as well as their future finances. To illustrate this, 70% of married couple in Britain are said to retire 10 years earlier than planned. As a result, they have more time to travel with their family, attend programs to sustain a healthy lifestyle or even enroll in classes for their preferred activity.
In conclusion, couples do not need to spend a lot of money to celebrate weddings. They can instead do it together with their family, relatives and closest colleagues and still make a wedding ceremony worth remembering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08035714286 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6489884236 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3931436199 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149089847452 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522024087811 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489486560667 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104389477263 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686365265484 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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