In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Excessive weight gain is always seen as a deterrent to good health. In several countries it has been observed in general, that the levels of obesity has increased causing ill effects on the health of a person. This essay will find the reasons as to why are people becoming highly obese? Furthermore, will come up with prolific solutions to tackle such issues.
The two prime reasons of weight gain being high consumption of junk food as well as sedentary lifestyle. Firstly, it has been observed, due to their busy schedule people do not prefer cooking at home, so they resort to easily available and cheap meals on a go, which results in high consumption of calorie prone foods like pizzas, burgers, hot dogs etc. Secondly, almost everyone is doing a desk job on a computer, which permits the person absolutely no time to exercise. Besides, exercise is a must when it comes to burning some calories and even for restoring the levels of fitness According to a recent research concluded that, most of the Americans of late are soaring the charts of obesity. Hence a sedentary life along with junk food seems to play a havoc on a person’s wellbeing.
Ideally two methods could help resolve the obesity related issues. Firstly, there should be awareness campaigns regarding the dietary habits and people must know about the quality of ingredients they are taking in. By this, the people develop the awareness level of looking for the labels of food packages to know the nutritional value of the packaged food. which would further, help them take healthy food choices. Secondly, when people choose to work in companies. The organisations should be instrumental in taking salubrious measures, like starting yoga sessions, marathons an even in-built gym. For example, of late many Call centres in India have in-built gyms in the company premises keeping their employees fit and energetic throughout the day. Therefore, by one’s awareness levels and even by company’s fitness programmes unfit people would highly benefit.
To sum up, weight rightly leads to a lot of health complications. Nonetheless, with the above mentioned actions it can be dealt with in a fairly pragmatic manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in general, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09668508287 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71887344766 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621546961326 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5808176265 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1052631579 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17666221006 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484184985038 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335093329869 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987393798633 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234664739963 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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