Your friend is moving to your neighborhood and asks for some information about the local schools. Write a letter to your friend about the following:
- Describe the neighborhood and local schools
- Talk about one school that you think would be good for his/her kids
Hello Steven,
I came to know from John that you are relocating to our area. it is an exiting news and we all are very happy here. I would like to
congratulate you on taking this decision.
Ours is a peaceful neighborhood well connected by roads. The houses are affordable and newly built. With easy access to Park Meadows
shopping center and Parker Adventist hospital, it is one of the top areas to live in. The school district here is one of the best in
the state. you already might have researched on the internet and must have got an idea. All the schools here are rated above 8 out
of 10. As far as I know your kids will be looking for admissions in primary school and middle school and we have got some very good
schools here. you will find that our area also has STEM schools and Charter schools. Based on the interest of your kids you can
select the schools.
I would recommend C2E middle school as my kids have been to that school. we all have really liked the school. The teachers provide
individual attention to the kids and every subject is given equal importance. The subjects are taught in such a way that it makes it
easy for the students to select their major going foreward. you can check the website of the school for more details.
All the best to you with your move. Hoping to see you soon.
best Regards
Anuraag
- Your friend is moving to your neighborhood and asks for some information about the local schools. Write a letter to your friend about the following:-Describe the neighborhood and local schools-Talk about one school that you think would be good for his/her 78
- You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit 27
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hello Steven, I came to know from John that you are re...
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...hn that you are relocating to our area. it is an exiting news and we all are very ...
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...all are very happy here. I would like to congratulate you on taking this decision...
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Suggestion: Congratulate
... very happy here. I would like to congratulate you on taking this decision. Ours ...
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... built. With easy access to Park Meadows shopping center and Parker Adventist hos...
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... With easy access to Park Meadows shopping center and Parker Adventist hospital, i...
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...hool district here is one of the best in the state. you already might have resear...
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...strict here is one of the best in the state. you already might have researche...
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... is one of the best in the state. you already might have researched on the in...
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...l the schools here are rated above 8 out of 10. As far as I know your kids will b...
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...chools here are rated above 8 out of 10. As far as I know your kids will be ...
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...le school and we have got some very good schools here. you will find that our are...
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...ol and we have got some very good schools here. you will find that our area also ...
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... got some very good schools here. you will find that our area also has STEM s...
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...sed on the interest of your kids you can select the schools. I would recom...
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...the interest of your kids you can select the schools. I would recommend C...
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... kids you can select the schools. I would recommend C2E middle school as m...
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...ol as my kids have been to that school. we all have really liked the school. The t...
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...y liked the school. The teachers provide individual attention to the kids and eve...
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... the school. The teachers provide individual attention to the kids and every subject...
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...re taught in such a way that it makes it easy for the students to select their ma...
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...ht in such a way that it makes it easy for the students to select their major ...
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...s to select their major going foreward. you can check the website of the school for...
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...bsite of the school for more details. All the best to you with your move. Hopi...
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...h your move. Hoping to see you soon. best Regards Anuraag
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62248995984 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22014628605 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.25596844 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.55 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.45 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232953416736 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669617379006 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625384498594 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867528029827 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630649854827 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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