TPO 1-
The passage and lecture want to explain the difference between 4-day and 5-day workers partly.as for them, 4-day working in a week is more beneficial despite the fact that the payment would be less than 5-day one.
in 4-day working, you can improve your personality and manner, as you have enough time to study. you’ll be more healthy since you can dedicate more time to resting and even exercising, in fact, your efficiency will increase and it's so necessary for that company.
In this condition, unsatisfying and nagging from the boring time-working among the employees will be disappeared and the rate of happiness will be increased, depending on the person and his preferences, by spending more time with family, going on a weekend trip, study, etc.
Additionally, by 4-day working, unconsciously, you are helping other people who don’t have any jobs, because you receive and work less than before, therefore a chance has been provided for the company to hire new staff to complete your work and the unemployment rate will be decreased.
- TPO25-Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 85
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
- TPO25 – Independent: A/D? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Tpo2 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is more beneficial despite the fact that the payment would be less than 5-day one...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... payment would be less than 5-day one. in 4-day working, you can improve your per...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You&apos
...nner, as you have enough time to study. you'll be more healthy since you can dedica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, as for, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 1373.03311258 64% => OK
No of words: 173.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78872830872 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 21.2450331126 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8530874416 49.2860985944 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.2 110.228320801 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 21.698381199 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.3589403974 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.0289183223 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.498013245 149% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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