Many people believe that advertising can have negative effects on customers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a universally acknowledged fact that advertisements are becoming an imperative part of our society. There is a school of thought that believes adverts are having detrimental impacts. I partially agree with the aforementioned statement and will elucidate my views in the below deliberation.
Advertising plays a crucial role in the marketing business. It provides people with numerous choices so that they can make an informed decision while buying a product. For an instance, a number of studies have consistently being performed that shows due to the advertisement of products through the portal of online media, there is a 25% boost in the company's net profit which will eventually increase the overall sale. Moreover, the broadcasting of adverts on television and radio, helps customers to save money, by informing them about a huge discount and combo deals.
On the other hand, advertisements will lead to consumerism and the direct target of industries will be children. As the younger generation has not yet learned the value of money, they pester their parents to buy products which they watch in any form of advertisements like TV adverts, leaflets or flyers. Furthermore, to quote an example, advertising junk food which is having a high content of fat and sugar will be harmful for the holistic development of the child. The government should impose a strict ban and introduce stringent laws for regulating such adverts that target children.
To Conclude, I support the notion that not all adverts will result in a negative impact, albeit they are some shrewd Industrialist which manipulate people for buying unnecessary things. Proper cooperation from individual and government can result in excellent consequences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34909090909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07100758763 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3500574719 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13196707771 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466500430719 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279617483985 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816262550284 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189239460201 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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