Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
give details of how you and friends or family use the centre
explain why sport and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Mr.Davis
Recently, we heard devastating news that "Startreck" mall is going to be closed permanently. Certainly this closure would have a deteriorating effect on our local community in terms spending quality time and availability of nearby shops.
Since opening of the centre, my family and friends always used it services. Especially during weekends all of us gather there to have meal and have our kids enjoy their playground. Moreover, almost all the clothes we wear were purchased at this mall.
The idea of our centre being forever closed ignites nightmares to me and I am pretty sure some other folks have similar feelings. Most probably, this incident will be a root for further issues such as people will start considering to move away from our neighborhood, various services will shut down and even schools and other educational centers will feel the strain. For instance, sport shops will suffer in the decreased revenue and, therefore, they will be forced to take measures to cut expenditures. Close by colleges will look less attractive for students because they need place for leisure time. Undoubtedly, more possible outcomes out of this situation could be imagined and all of them would have negative effect on our community. Please help us stop the closure.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Davis
Dear Mr.Davis Recently, we heard devastating ne...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Davis Recently, we heard devastating news that...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering moving'.
Suggestion: considering moving
...urther issues such as people will start considering to move away from our neighborhood, various ser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25118483412 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89286708108 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.734597156398 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4709007799 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0864716072181 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364256305434 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389767804339 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458648974421 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00716600501667 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.