some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars,trucks, and motorcycles are banned from city center.people are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses,taxis,and metro on vehicle free days.to what extent do you think advantages overweigh the disadvantages
Traffic congestion in major cities is a predominant issue which could be called as a bane on faster pace of life in those cities.however,city authorities of a few cities are trying to reduce by banning private transportation in city on selected days. Only public transportation is allowed to use by all on such days. I opine that merits are more than demerits.
At the outset,considering possible disadvantages of banning private vehicles like cars,trucks and motorcycles would be discomfort and difficulties which local people have to confront owing to this change in their routine life.to be more precise,citizens, those usually drive their own vehicles to commute,would find it difficult to use public transport.Especially,the affluent citizen have to give up their luxurious cars and have to travel with destitutes.Whats 's more,as each and every person have to use public transportation ,then all will be in rush and there may be a congregation of local residents on bus stops and metro station which may be difficult to tackle for limited staff of these facilities.So,it would act as burden on public facility.Other than that,banning trucks may create scarcity of few imported goods in the city center on those particular days.
As per advantages are concerned,I believe that first and foremost advantage would be reduction in traffic congestion which would ultimately diminish the amount of hazadrous gases into air,hence would be good for environment.Avoiding private vehicles would check on use of fossil fuels and play crucial role in their conservation.Vehicle-free days not only solve problem of traffic,but also encourage the use of public transport which would be great for economic growth of public transportation.Thus, increased profit could be used for betterment of infrastructure of roads.In addition to this,barrier between social unequility may be destroyed by social interaction between individuals of different social status while commuting.
to conclude,vehicle-free days in cities by authorities is a good approach in terms of social,economic and environmental aspects.Therefore,I strongly admit that this system has more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66463414634 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.99413516358 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 321.14417842 49.4020404114 650% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.666666667 106.682146367 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264223827075 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13327261832 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638396789951 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167598814258 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032516102169 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 50.2224549098 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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