Topic: More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
With developing in competition world, people often consider the prominent things in any cases, it could be household things, vehicles and clothes. There are several points and causes that lead to be purchased product from famouse firm. In addition, this issue is controversial because there are many benefits of it and some of the repurcussion. This essay would discuss reason behind buying things from famose brand with its effect on development.
There are manifolds points that clearly shows the reason, first and foremost, people buying product because of eminent enterprises strongly believe in adverstiment through various medium like televison and new-papers. Hence, it is easy to catch up eye of people and consider corresponding brand during buying certain things. Moving further, famous brands provide excellent services and products, owing to that company become knowing to everyone. As a result, people often consider the brand that provide good help and services after the purchasing things; therfore they consider eminent brands.
Furthermore, buying things from famous firm has a several pros and cons. Discussing with both side, people get best product and communication support if company looks plausible, otherwise we believe blindly on them, than we ready to face problems. Because of famous companies have a millions of consumer and sometime they are not able to provide require satisfaction. For instance, in India Jio is the communication giant company and most indian people use simcard from that; but sometimes company fail in providing data speed and voice. Considering counterpart, famous brands are less intended towards frauds because they keep their image on market. Hence, there is less chance for cheating and frauds.
To conclude, This topic will take place on neutral side. Because, there are different scenarios in each product when we consider particular brands during purchasing. Also, every person have different perception. Hence, based on requirement people should buy things from prominent brands and local brands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...cause there are many benefits of it and some of the repurcussion. This essay would discuss ...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...cons. Discussing with both side, people get best product and communication support if co...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...blems. Because of famous companies have a millions of consumer and sometime they are not a...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: a million; millions
...blems. Because of famous companies have a millions of consumer and sometime they are not a...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... topic will take place on neutral side. Because, there are different scenarios in each ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from prominent brands and local brands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55238095238 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64676245136 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8646909383 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171467569349 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531372364578 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369682991251 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108883121154 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236113252652 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.