You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.
Dear Cathy,
It’s been long since I last saw you. How are you?
I will be visiting Singapore in the beginning of next month for some research work. Initial planning is to be in the city for 5 days, but I might extend it couple of days in case any of the factory visit get postponed.
After checking the google map, I came to realize that the research center where I will be reporting everyday is just two stops away in bus from your residence. So, how about I stay at your home if you are in town and got some spare space? I will genuinely appreciate it as it will be the best way for me to make the most of the trip by spending time with you and you little daughters.
Lastly and most importantly, I would like you to accept a nominal fees for my stay as I will be reimbursed from the host organization anyway. Also, I would not feel comfortable staying at your place for free, especially because this is a work trip.
I will wait for your reply!
Take care,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'couples'?
Suggestion: couples
... city for 5 days, but I might extend it couple of days in case any of the factory visi...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...search center where I will be reporting everyday is just two stops away in bus from your...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30481283422 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35812506253 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1476976674 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380530506177 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158502320492 0.0766984524023 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722892937671 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208206188649 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586232040388 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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