Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while
others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
In this technology era, people keep being up-to-date with the development of the society by adapting to various kinds of modern activities especially in reading online newspaper. It is indisputable that traditional printing paper used to bring people a wide range of benefits thanks to its reliability. However, from my own perspective, it is gradually dominated by online news.
On the one hand, newspapers are on the shortlist of numerous people for many reasons. First and foremost, this form of reading has been famous for its carefully chosen articles by major publishers which readers can absolutely place their trust in. To elaborate, all the articles have been through rigorous proofreading process, written by certified journalists who can hold accountable for their work. Moreover, people can experience many different articles with numerous topic in a newspaper as all of them have been selected to keep readers apprised of the latest transformations in Vietnam as well as all over the world.
On the other hand, online source has gained undesirable merits compared to the other forms including newspaper, radio or television. News can be easily updated instantly to report the most accurate or current details of any situations thanks to technology, whereas this action can not be done to traditional method as once newspapers are printed, there is nothing that can be fixed. Besides, there are many other live feed actions through Facebook or Instagram during an accident or terrorist attack which informed people to stay alert or get away the danger zones. Thus, people do not have to spend much time and energy for buying a newspaper as they can access to online news more straightforward with only one click and that cost them nothing. With regard to the environment, online sources can also reduce the amount of tree bark cut down on every year in order to save the natural habitat and prevent threats to endangered species.
To sum up, though there are many incontrovertible advantages that newspapers have brought to life, online source is invented to enhance people’s living standard which contains more merits compared to the traditional newspaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27428571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85416416158 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6153846154 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102486243596 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399836909059 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256325657335 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062606223513 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191215598049 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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