You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
Explain why getting a job is a good idea for hom/her
Suggest types of job that would be suitable.
Dear James,
Hi! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in good health. I have received your letter last week and I am glad that you asked me my opinion about your career.
Having known you for years I believe that the traditional and conventional method of educational style is not your cup of tea. From your schooling itself you never showed any interest in studies. So it will be a waste of money as well as time if you choose higher education.
In my opinion it is better to get a job rather than pursing your studies. You have earned a lot of experience through variety of part-time jobs, so i think that it will help you to cope with the work culture of a firm. Nevertheless you can save money and join college in the future you change your mind.
You were always fond of cars from your childhood and you have gathered in-depth knowledge through your work experience. It will benefit you if you choose sales and marketing in any of the premium car sales and also apart from that you are a good team player with excellent communication skills.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Best wishes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, Hi! How are you? I hope this letter fin...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have received your letter last week and I am glad that you asked me my opinion a...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e through variety of part-time jobs, so i think that it will help you to cope wit...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...o cope with the work culture of a firm. Nevertheless you can save money and join college in ...
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Line 11, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Looking forward to hearing from you soon Best wishes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50490196078 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36895591639 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7396885386 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24714010591 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981745437713 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332624280887 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143725414002 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387389982014 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.