A friend you met while studying abroad requested you inform her about job opportunities in your country and you found a suitable one for her.
Dear Rose,
Hope this letter meets you well? I am writing to inform you about a job offer at my husband's place of employment. He works with a multinational telecommunication organization. He told me the company needs an Information Technology Trainer for their IT department. The job entails; training staff in relevant in-house courses designed to help improve their work efficiency, production of training manuals and occasional user support. You will also have opportunities to be trained, to keep you abreast of technology.
As a Computer Science graduate and a Microsoft certified Trainer, I believe the job is right for you and I am sure you will enjoy the challenges coupled with the fact that you have always wanted to live in Nigeria.
Nevertheless, if you are cool with the job, all you need to do is log on to the company's website: www.mtnnigeria.net, and fill a job application form after which you also send a digital copy of your credentials. The staff in charge of recruitment will contact you if you are successful and a virtual interview will be schedule for you.
I hope to hear from you soonest.
Best regards,
Joyce
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you soonest. Best regards, Joyce
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99481865285 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17961675105 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8682071397 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35682100547 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132229897622 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093686026847 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227438556741 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583788908943 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.