Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer?
films are the way most people easily connect.few assume the characters while reading novel.Imagining makes to think or visualize the acts in the play,so i personally prefer to read book prior to watch movie for following reasons.
firstly,interpreting the nature of play and enthusiasm in story make readers addicted for the subject.Authors intension is clearly seen in novel with keen narration through his words.for instance im a fan of chethan bhagat who writes novel mainly on his life experiences.first book written by him was "Two states" ,later the act was directed as a nice movie. this novel explains meeting his love first time and their college days,later how they struggled to get married with their parents acceptance,all of them were well narrated. after im done with book i watched movie,im so excited about the places and emotional scenes ,what i read and seeing film at that time felt like eye feast,my brain keeps on striking for next scene.of all years that was the one movie which i dont forget for my life time. it was fun seeing imagination on big screen.
Secondly,few things brainstrom everyone ,which we dont forget.for example,subjects we study in our schools most of them we wont be able remember after these many years,but the film we saw or places we went will recall us every now and then.
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- Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer? 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 222.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00900900901 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02536419364 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725225225225 0.524837075471 138% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2933534545 48.9658058833 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.333333333 100.406767564 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 5.45110844103 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177540829144 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823960682755 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966070350894 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133582317013 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099801874907 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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