Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think it government's responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After each celebration or event desserts or cake are almost always offered. As we all know, sugar is harmful for hour health. Some people think that a government's responsibility is to stop people from consuming sugar, and others say that it is an individual's responsibility to limit the amount.
On one hand, some people believe that a government must take an initiative to reduce people's sugar consumption. First, government must raise taxes on products that include sugar and raw materials. Try to decrease import or production of sugars and find alternatives. Moreover, awareness campaigns should be done towards sugar's side effects on people's health. For example, people say that a government should put restrictions on sugar products and assist its citizens by orienting them. In my opinion, I disagree with this point since no one can put restrictions on what people want to eat they can instead warn them from its negative impacts on their health.
On the other hand, several people think it is an individual's duty to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Firs, human beings should take care of their health and pay attention to the quantity they consume. They should reduce and if they can stop eating sugar and its derivatives; by doing so, they will avoid several health problems such as diabetes and obesity which are the main reason that causes heart attack due to increase in fat. However, people also need to know what to eat and what intake their body asks for. For example, I'm one of those people that cannot avoid consuming sugar or sweet, and sometimes it causes some side effects such as stomach-ache. I disagree with the above since it is the responsibility of each individual, to take care of himself and know the amount of sugar he must eat per day.
In conclusion, people want the government to take the full responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, others think that it is an individual matter and each one must be in charge. In my opinion, sugar causes many problems and effects our lives negatively, that's why we must know how and when to eat sugar, to avoid health difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...r hour health. Some people think that a governments responsibility is to stop people from c...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ing sugar, and others say that it is an individuals responsibility to limit the amount. ...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...her hand, several people think it is an individuals duty to limit the amount of sugar they ...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ntake their body asks for. For example, Im one of those people that cannot avoid c...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...blems and effects our lives negatively, thats why we must know how and when to eat su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88088642659 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69842495283 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487534626039 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2841663514 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474641879901 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174112154666 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132060236052 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346134308287 0.151304729494 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566028679603 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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