Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
These days the growing number of crime has become a major problem in most societies. Some people think that preventing crime is an impossible action in the current situation but I don’t agree with this idea and I will discuss it throughout this essay.
In my opinion, deterring crime can be done is two levels; before committing a crime and after it. At first, we should have an education system that cans aware students about the negative impacts of crime for society and for the offender. Teachers also should teach students about honestly and mortality that they will become useful residents for their communities. Secondly, we should conduct some prolific research about the main reason for the offenses. For example, poverty is one of the most important reasons that so-called the mother of crime. So it’s the government’s responsibility to eradicate poverty to meet a better society.
One the second level, there are some measures that could take after happening a violent act. According to the law of each country, their governments punish criminals for their guilt in different ways. For example, fines are used as a punishment for minor crimes. If the crime is more serious, prison is the most common punishment. Community service is another way to reform offenders. Lastly, capital punishment is the most severe way that usually it’s sentenced for murder in some countries. Also, the government can rehabilitate prisoners by some vocational training. By this way, they would learn some specific job skills and it’s less likely to re-offend.
In conclusion, although some of these ways have some drawbacks, we could deter committing a crime and limit their negative impacts of it. It’s crystal clear that we cannot have a community that is clear from all kinds of crimes but we could curb the vast number of it by taking these measures.
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| 2019-04-23 | acr | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12703583062 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71674126191 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7603390379 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101424791869 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346463087168 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558648088891 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670612995451 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357074307203 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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