Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. what problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?
Successful and living out of stress with wife and children is one of the want of people. Both aspects are significant for common man. This essay will highlight what are the issues behind this situation and what are the potential measures to resolve it.
There are two main problems those could be created automatically after running both of the above aspects together at same time. Firstly, many people in this modern era are being patient of depression to keep up profits in business and spending leisure time with their loved ones. Focusing on more than one aim at a time results stress. Secondly, getting weak of relations is also responsible for one person to do multiple tasks at one time. Divorce cases are one of the result of these circumstances. These circumstances are causing a considerable amount of damage to one handler.
Some solutions can be adopted to improve this situation. One approach is the application of hiring loyal and responsible staff to handle particular level of business. working of staff members according to their ability can be a relief from stress to keep up success and getting rid of a major issue of concentrating at multiple tasks for one person. Another measure is that family members understand the burden upon person and limit the satisfaction zone of profit to be made from business. This ensures that both of the significant parts of life would not be destroyed.
In conclusion, this essay highlighted the problems behind this happening are stress and weakening of relations. This essay also presented that solutions are twofold: hiring staff related to their deserving posts and making limits of profits results to a happy life.
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- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 56
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual welbeing. What factors contribute job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 56
- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. what problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...to handle particular level of business. working of staff members according to their abi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03225806452 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71129837163 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2268542423 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247581802292 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712189024151 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596649885366 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141930142203 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221021913356 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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