The diagram below shows the distribution of men and women in key professions in Malaysia in 1970.
Describe the distribution of men and women in the professions in Malaysia, as indicated in the diagram.
The diagram describes the percentage of men and women working in several main jobs in Malaysia in 1970.
At first glance, we can see that most of the laborers in various kinds of professions were men. The only exception was nursing and midwives in which the ratio of women was absolutely dominant at 99%.
Obviously, there were a significantly large amount of men who worked in the remaining segments such as jurists (91%), accountants (91%), physical scientists (85%), architects and engineers (97%), medicine (83%), statisticians and mathematicians (83%) and education (92%). Whereas, the proportion of women who joined these fields was just below 20%.
In regard to the teacher job, the imbalance seemed a bit improved. The percentage of male teacher in University and Higher education, secondary school and primary school were 76%, 63% and 60% respectively. Whilst proportion of female teachers gradually increased from 24% to 37% and 40%.
In summary, there was a huge difference in the distribution of men and women who worked in Malaysia in 1970 when the male laborers contributed as the key role in the labor market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d mathematicians 83% and education 92%. Whereas, the proportion of women who joined the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, whereas, in summary, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13661202186 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89955468321 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8446194559 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282876497117 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104253475931 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127219690245 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167973495424 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138889802719 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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