You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the accommodation which has been provided to me by the company in Chicago city. I came here for a data analytics training and company has provided me a studio apartment. The flat is fully furnished, and it has an amazing view of the city. Moreover, the shopping center is nearby and the facilities are very good. Inspite of all this I am facing some issues in the apartment which requires your kind attention.
While my room is pleasant, but the heating system is not working properly. As you know, winters are going on and it would be difficult to adjust in below zero-degree temperature without the heating unit. Though I tried to lodge a complaint to the leasing office, but they have not taken any action so far.
I would request you to rectify this issue as soon as possible or else provide me a new place to stay .I would really appreciate that.
I will look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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...erature without the heating unit. Though I tried to lodge a complaint to the lea...
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...heating unit. Though I tried to lodge a complaint to the leasing office, but the...
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...e or else provide me a new place to stay .I would really appreciate that. I wil...
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...or else provide me a new place to stay .I would really appreciate that. I will...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tay .I would really appreciate that. I will look forward to hear from you soon...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...appreciate that. I will look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68539325843 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64980413175 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685393258427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.585696109 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8181818182 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189243301252 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057426845918 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482341950309 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916314415153 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263529058174 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.