Write about a holiday that you went on that was really important to you. Say where you went and what you saw, and explain why it was the best holiday you ever had.
Spending holidays with family members is the best part of our lives, so it is true in my case as well. Though, I have travelled to various places, but my recent visit to Toronto is really close to my heart. I travelled to Toronto in last summers with my family, which is situated in north-east of the North America.
Primarily, I planned this trip for my partner and children during the summer holidays, as I wanted to spend some quality time with my close ones. This trip was really important to me, because I have been planning this trip for a while. Eventually, after a long time, I was able to make it to happen successfully.
Secondly, when we reached at Toronto airport, we saw a huge tower called Trade Tower, the tallest tower of the Canada. Then, on the way to the hotel, there were many skyscrapers in the metro area. I was amazed to see tall buildings because I have never seen those kinds of high rise buildings in my entire life. Therefore, I enjoyed a lot with my beloved one's while surfing around downtown area.
Finally, it was an amazing tour, and most importantly, I spent quality time with my wife. I was captivated by the beauty of that place due to variety of different monuments. Moreover, it was a new and amazing experience visiting Canada which is considered as a popular tourist destination all over the world.
To sum up, it's always been an unforgettable moment travelling with my spouse and kids, and we have enjoyed each and every stage of this trip a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57620817844 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55877146245 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2712487935 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696042851903 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027442517687 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249519313354 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382851860926 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240977032365 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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