You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop manager. Describe the problem with the equipment.
Explain what happened when you phoned the shop.
Say what you would like the manager do.
Dear sir/ madam
I’am writing this letter in regard to an appliance that I currently bought from your store.
A couple of days back, on the 29th of February, a refrigerator from whirlpool company approached in terms of my order. Its design is awesome with an appealing color. All seems perfect, therefore without making a delay, I installed it keeping all food items in it at night. But, I was in a shock when I opened it in the morning time, as it did not work and all my food got spoiled due to it’s damaged function.
As soon as I contacted your customer service center, a person who talked to me told me that he can not do anything about it. Also, he mentioned it is opposed to your company’s terms and conditions to take any action or responsibility after delivering goods.
I was completely shocked by getting such a reply, as it has mentioned clearly that customer gets 6 months of warranty after purchasing any items from whirlpool company, so how could one do so? Therefore, I request to replace my bought items with the other ones, as I’am not responsible for this faulty item. I hope your cooperation in this issue. Sincerely,
Ritu Magar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ madam I'am writing this letter in regard ...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...adam I'am writing this letter in regard to an app...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat I currently bought from your store. A couple of days back, on the 29th of Fe...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iled due to it's damaged function. As soon as I contacted your customer ser...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... responsibility after delivering goods. I was completely shocked by getting such...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m not responsible for this faulty item. I hope your cooperation in this issue. ...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I hope your cooperation in this issue. Sincerely, ...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Sincerely, Ritu Magar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68599033816 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77354434809 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661835748792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5814325951 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0678134974516 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246940849976 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190722875656 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327368643099 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169911052266 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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