The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the changes made to parking and road accessibility to a city hospital, over a period of time from 2007 to 2010.Overall, the road facility to the city hospital was improved so as to ensure smooth flow of vehicles to the hospital by constructing roundabouts at the junctions. Further, parking space was significantly increased within this period.
In 2007, there was not any roundabout at the junction,as compared to 2010. Two roundabouts were constructed at the junctions, to the south of the city hospital. The ring road around the hospital remained unchanged by the end of 2010,as it was in 2007.
Moreover,in 2010, much improvement was made to the vehicle parking space. A significantly large public parking was constructed to the east of the hospital, just by the ring road.After the addition of this parking space,the combined parking for staff and public park was then used as staff car parking only. The bus stop within the car parking was removed and a new bus station was constructed in 2010. The bus station connects roundabout to the ring road to the hospital and to the city road. As a result, the traffic movement was made easier and efficient in 2010 as compared to that in 2007.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant. 67
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ccessibility to a city hospital, over a period of time from 2007 to 2010.Overall, the road fac...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...over a period of time from 2007 to 2010.Overall, the road facility to the city hospital...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ility to the city hospital was improved so as to ensure smooth flow of vehicles to the h...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...e was not any roundabout at the junction,as compared to 2010. Two roundabouts were ...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...d of 2010,as it was in 2007. Moreover,in 2010, much improvement was made to the ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... of the hospital, just by the ring road.After the addition of this parking space,the ...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...After the addition of this parking space,the combined parking for staff and public p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88942307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86924994193 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485576923077 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5024160682 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160899364165 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852535884763 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678149211733 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14271160855 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432874598915 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.