The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the primary reasons why people came to and left the United Kingdom in 2007.
Overall, it is clear that people came to and left the United Kingdom for a definite job, while the least purpose of immigrating was no reason given and few people left the country for formal study.
To start with, having a definite job is almost similar in ratios for immigration and emigration accounted for 30% and 29%, respectively. Meanwhile, more than a fifth of people looked for work outside the country compared to people who went to the United Kingdom at 12%. Formal study is more popular to people who migrated in the country accounting to just over a quarter of the total ratios, while a small minority went to another country to do their study.
The ratio of those moving to join a family were quite similar for immigration and immigration. Then, more than a third of people had ‘other’ reason or did not state a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only just over a fifth of people who immigrated.
- The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process 80
- Problem Today s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 86
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph show the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. 73
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- The graph shows underground station passenger numbers in london 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... over a fifth of people who immigrated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, third, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73626373626 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62230131662 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5298520636 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101860685119 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056323612403 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361293780987 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793146509504 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335828873183 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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