In the modern world, mobile and smartphone use has become universal in most parts of the world. Although there are clearly many advantages of this technology, there are many who believe it also brings many disadvantages. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
In this temporary era, the utilisation of mobile and smartphone has been widespread all over the world. Regarding that, several individuals firmly consider that the prevalence of it will render numerous benefits while the others do believe that it is going to provide some drawbacks. In accordance with this argument, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, various people, who contemplate that the spreading of this technology can bestow countless upsides, personally think that the instance of it can be seen by the evidence for obtaining multifarious information, which are easier to be accessed, from around the world. Furthermore, it is apparent that it is able to assist persons being connected to other people, particularly to their loved ones. It, lastly, is capable of providing more opportunities to individuals to create a business which related to this technology.
Nevertheless, others do consider that the prevalence of it can confer two downsides. Regarding these weaknesses, it, first and foremost, is able to create unfavourable impacts to adolescents if those juveniles utilise it for accessing negative content. Moreover, it, additionally, can increase the number of crime which related to the use of smartphone such as utilising someone information for bad purposes.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that basically, the spreading of this temporary technology is capable of rendering countless positive influences to people. However, as we merely would like to derive favourable impact, we are supposed to use it wisely and properly and we also should control offspring for using it in order to solely produce fruitful effect eventually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40875912409 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06111928484 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2593470614 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130017554186 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471001720965 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480469527912 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747299838548 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516175801614 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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