Your local newspaper want to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a Letter to the newspaper. In your letter
. Suggest someone who deserves the reward.
. Mention what they have done to help the community.
. Say what reward you want like to give this person.
Dear Sir/Madam,
It is an interesting inventiveness taken by your newspaper to reward a person for contributing a lot for community. In this way we can motivate people do more good work. I would like to recommend Mr.prabhjot singh for the reward. he is very cooperative and a humble person.
Mr prabhjot has done many noble cause for our community, he provide education , food and medication free of cost to necessity people. Every weekend he clean our society. I would like you to reward him with a good amount of money as he is serving other people free of cost. If you reward him with money he will be more able to help them.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply and hope you will take me recommendation into consideration.
Your Faithfully,
Preeti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...mmend Mr.prabhjot singh for the reward. he is very cooperative and a humble person...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
... many noble cause for our community, he provide education , food and medication free of...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for our community, he provide education , food and medication free of cost to nec...
^^
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e is serving other people free of cost. If you reward him with money he will be mo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 632.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75187969925 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88407492467 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706766917293 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5733948426 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187299470636 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714541582127 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568157747403 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114631402994 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449783475615 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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