Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
there are always debt on this type of topic that which education is better degree or master degree. According to my view I totally agree with university study.
First and foremost reason is deep knowledge. In university any person study on one particular field so they have full control on that subject. In addition they focus on practical work which makes them a better knowledgeable person.
if a student is very good at his own filed then in future they will make new things by innovation and that will improve standard of the nation. so that, A particular field knowledge is important for self as well as for community.
On contradicting side, other belive that it is enough study for a person to become degree holder. there are not higher education requirements because study gives theoretical knowledge but a world is very different from the textbook. so they believe that after graduation person have to do a job because job gives better understanding as well as money so burden of family reduced.
In conclusion, if a person have done master than it is better because they have technical problem solving capabilities. it is very important in any job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91414141414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7445998402 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6124978062 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133227609935 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461888262771 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035176290876 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715916060274 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494098314713 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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