Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.
The author’s claim “knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today” and in reason author stated that “The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past”, in my opinion author has overlooked that past had taught many things to humans and world is still same place only technology has evolved, people exhibit same behavior. History have set several milestones that one should know to make world a better place to live. Following are reasons for validating my above opinion.
Firstly, history had great impact in people’s lives. It had taught many politicians the way to maintain peace among people of the nation. It has also taught humans about how to tackle situation and how human actions can lead to disaster. History is not just about wars but through history one can learn about existing culture and traditions. No one can truly determine the value of historic buildings if the person is unaware about its history. For example, if a person visits Taj Mahal, he/she will not able to experience the wonder if he/she is unaware about its history, about how such buildings come into existence. Much like other subject, history is also an important subject. History educates an individual about his/her culture and traditions and helps them in preserving those culture and traditions.
Secondly, History will make a person learn the importance of days that are celebrated by people. Consider example, In India, 26 January is celebrated as republic day, if person is not aware about history related to such important date, he/she will not able to develop respect towards those who have scarified their life for people of India. History will also teach humans the consequences of one’s actions so that one can elude taking such actions. It is truly said that failure is one type of success because it teach person to obviate making such decisions that can lead to failure.
However, Author’s claim holds some credulity. In this technological era, technology had not remain same, instead dealing with technological problem is even become more complex compared to past. Consider an example, If person want to integrate two cross platform languages codes, then past experience will not help much in such case, recent studies will only able to solve such problems. Same way in robotics, people are striving in building robots, thus in such cases past will has nothing to offer. Thus, in such cases, author’s claim about knowing about past cannot help people to make important decisions today seems to be valid
On wrapping up, past holds great importance in determining the consequences of human’s actions and provoke humans to maintain brotherhood but fails in providing any aid towards making decisions related to current technologies.
- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings. 58
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 58
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others. 66
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. 66
- Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
Suggestion: teaches
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...s technological era, technology had not remain same, instead dealing with technologica...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...wo cross platform languages codes, then past experience will not help much in such case, recent...
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Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ng robots, thus in such cases past will has nothing to offer. Thus, in such cases, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2440087146 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68163668008 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505446623094 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.8284049233 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.35 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366323507136 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879215928057 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116466773882 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212947223679 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154047856269 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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