Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities or towns, only old people live in the countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
In today’s modern world, youth generation chooses urban area over rural region and left aged ones in countryside.
There can be many problems due to this mass migration. Several measures can be taken to stop this trend.
Majority of persons lives in the countryside are on the opposite of young generations. old people tend to live in a countryside in their pension hood, for instance, my grandfather worked in a company throughout the career, which filled with stress, burdens, work load etcetera. In his old age he like to be relax and want to spend the life quietly and most importantly naturally far away from city chores.
this trends involving lots of concerns as well, in particular Once a nuclear family becomes complex one instantly. this is the most impactful effect on children’s mind and behavior. elders can teach the life lessons in kids very nicely and according to their life long experiences. every kid can develop such qualities without an extra efforts. Moreover, if both parents are working they can feel secure and under the continual warmth of their grandparents, which is a prime relaxation for their guardian. one of my neighbor couple are working in a firm while they are on duty their grand parents take care of the child and even help them with their studies and pay an important attention.
government should consider this serious issue and take necessary steps so. For example, many young generation migrate to city center with a view of decent job or with better scope for business start-up. city provides perfect atmosphere to grow and can prove his or her potential in lots of ways. if government offer the necessary subsidies for business set up and even to develop the existing one, people may have at least consider staying in countryside rather then parting ways from family. In last stages of life even old people wish for a warmth of their child and grandchildren. Established people could form communities in the region to help the bright minds, which could prevent the young blood not to leave their native.
In conclusion, youth are essential for developments of any region or city. countryside needs them the same way cities feels their presence. Keeping in mind the culture and elder people every young people have to reevaluate their option based on their potential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04627249357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64971604198 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588688946015 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8396894075 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4761904762 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244334592825 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731434727599 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586874685906 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127380995278 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801910345995 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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