You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about it.
Write a letter to your friend explaining the college and giving your recommendations.
In your letter, include:
why did you apply for admission to this college?
what do you like and dislike about it?
would you recommend this college to your friend? Why?
Write at least 150 words
Dear John,
I am really happy to get a letter from your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that
you are seeking my help in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in A&M Management college because of its reputation and cost of the course. You might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year. Moreover, it will cost me only Rs. 20 lacs to complete my degree including my accommodation.
The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behaviour. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always response properly. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey). However, course contents are rigorously packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is good, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers.
If your GMAT score is more than 650, you must apply without any hesitation. Furthermore, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted.
Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to see you in the next term.
Best regards,
Bibhu Kalita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'amazed'.
Suggestion: amazed
...your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that you are seeking my help i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77251184834 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680495987 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706161137441 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.743258269 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279425659229 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786171844757 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722429214288 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142540263776 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435366912986 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.