Tourism has become an integral part of modern lifestyle.people travel to relax to explore the beauties of nature and wildlife,to visit historical monuments and museums and also to discover new cultures.
It is no doubt today modern lifestyle is very common in any nations through traveller has so basic need in human being life.It root can that some older ponder dozen a reveal their beauties of behaviour as well as wildlife.There are plethora visit one to other place like religious instead of museum and update by new rituals.There are manifold reason behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue that multiheads.There most predominant tourism plays a vital role in whole life.Therefore,some adolescent consider
that spring off travel has to relax as far as calm down and they next time easily focus on their work while that why travelling have given lots of relaxation and peaceful weather.For instance,sometimes person has very exhausted than they have need to break for their job.Furthermore,I think tourism has many essential part of life.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the ,in my point of view youth has travelling all in all they has superb influence in their work because they feel delight and joy they do anythings.Hence,they would show the look and
beauties of attitude and wildlife.Addition they can learn new things.For examples,cultures, museum, theater,history,historical monument
and so on.lastly,they could stay new destination consists as youngster can learn historical story and they might acknowledge about it.
All said and down,on one hand it is true that tourism is part of modern lifestyle in our centuries but also I think it is good impact for individuals.on other hand they will travel that they might relax and they next time give thousand proportion in their work.Thus,adolescent can learn history and historical story if new cultures than they has visit in any place/city/nations.they can learn it.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28865979381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72413157783 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3508054443 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 384.75 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.0 7.06120827912 609% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177562152518 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109886299134 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106245872818 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913129795008 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645342544728 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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