Summarizing the process
The manufacture of canning fruits is depicted in the illustration. Overall, this process has three main steps, involving preparing and canning, before the fruits are delivered to consumers.
To begin with, fresh fruits are manually collected. Next, they are dispatched to factories, where they are properly treated. There, the fruits are washed in order to clear away the dirt. Then, it is important that the quality of every fruit is thoroughly assessed before they are preserved in cold storage. Subsequently, fruits are graded according to their weight to make sure the each can has the same content. After that, peels are discarded before slicing and removing the core so as to be convenient for instant use later.
In the first step of the canning process, sliced fruits are automatically arranged in cans by a conveyor belt before this machine seal those cans. After that, the fruit cans are disinfected by placing over heat in order to kill bacteria. Next, they are left in a storehouse after labels are added. Finally, the canned fruits are transported to customers for various use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ed before slicing and removing the core so as to be convenient for instant use later. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63159225143 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3658673747 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516595764044 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181807381652 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407702279174 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479401276585 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366418253764 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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