These both pie charts revel information about different online shopping sales for different retail sectors in New Zealand country.
We can see from the charts that 36% of travel in sales contracts for market sector in the year 2003 but this percentage had dropped to 29% in 2013. After that, film and music was sharply increased in both the years. 21% in 2003 and 33% in2013 respectively. Then, only 19% people was interested to bought books for retail sector in 2003 and again it was slightly climbed. 22% in 2013. If we look at the, clothes then trend became change 24% people involved in retail sector and then it was dramatically declined in the year 2013.
In a nutshell, the most striking feature of this graph was travel was played vitally important role in 2003 and film and music was also covered high market in New Zealand in 2013
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...tly climbed. 22% in 2013. If we look at the, clothes then trend became change 24% pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 580.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23971680374 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 156.6 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1099905481 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112051006066 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474633383414 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384719826707 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805295356725 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374195481926 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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