Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In any field be it business,politics,education,government; leadership
plays an important in success of it. Leader is the core of any field,and it his guidance that contributes to lot to the success of any field. Revatilazation of an enterprise is neccessary for better growth,
but not through changing leaders frequently.
Once a leader is selected, he takes his time in understanding the ideas , underlying principal on which enterprise is built .Any leader take considerate amount of time to build ideas and plans that can help in the success of enterprise.
Furthermore , a leader who is in position for several years, knows
everything about his followers -How to manage and motivate team.
He must have experienced difficult situations in the enterprise,
that are bound to occur again and will pacify them easily.
Moreover, that most of the success enterprises have leaders
that are in position for several years.Be it Bill Gates of microsoft or
Mukesh Ambani of reliance. Leaders are the on who bring changes to the society. Some people will argue that their are some leader that are egotist and does not want to adapt new ideas or change their approach, but the number of those leaders is in paucity.
Revitalization of an interprise is neccessay through adopting
new ideas, policies but not through changing leaders frequently.
Instead it should be leader who should bring those changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , politics
In any field be it business,politics,education,government; leadership plays...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
... field be it business,politics,education,government; leadership plays an important in succ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...s of it. Leader is the core of any field,and it his guidance that contributes to lot...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...akes his time in understanding the ideas , underlying principal on which enterpris...
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Suggestion: .
...g principal on which enterprise is built .Any leader take considerate amount of ti...
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Suggestion: Any
...principal on which enterprise is built .Any leader take considerate amount of time ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...n which enterprise is built .Any leader take considerate amount of time to build ide...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the success of enterprise. Furthermore , a leader who is in position for several...
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Suggestion:
... difficult situations in the enterprise, that are bound to occur again and will p...
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Suggestion:
... of the success enterprises have leaders that are in position for several years.B...
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Suggestion: Be
... that are in position for several years.Be it Bill Gates of microsoft or Mukesh ...
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Suggestion:
...l years.Be it Bill Gates of microsoft or Mukesh Ambani of reliance. Leaders are t...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... Ambani of reliance. Leaders are the on who bring changes to the society. Some peop...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...he society. Some people will argue that their are some leader that are egotist and do...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...t through changing leaders frequently. Instead it should be leader who should bring th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2610619469 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60961181793 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5420349112 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210403014251 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877658635145 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702750386637 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776863439099 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748876073341 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.