Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most of the people believe that private secondary schools provide much advantages to students. To some extent, there is a group of people who claims the negative impact of private secondary education on society. It is well-known that private sector follows international educational standard and facilitates their students. To provide an opinion, this essay will emphasize on both aspects and discuss the effects of private secondary education.
Firstly, private secondary school facilitates the students by providing good environment and infrastructure. Student feel more convenient to use such facilities. For example, private school provide state of the art technology in the class rooms because knowledge can be easily communicated to the students. Therefore, people trust in the private secondary school due to the infrastructure and convenience in student learning.
Secondly, it is evident that private education is expensive. The admission requirements are tough in private schools. Sometimes society feel isolated due to the different classes and sections provided in the private schools. For instance, many private schools offer several sub divisions for a single standard. This variance in several group of students for the same standard airs a discouragement among students. Hence, some people feel that private secondary education may create a negativity in the society.
In the end, the private secondary education does provide facilities to students. It also creates a negative impact on society by differentiating among students. In my opinion, education system must be unified to create competitive environment for public and private sector. Similarly, a unified system offers a choice among people to decide which option is suitable for their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... that private secondary schools provide much advantages to students. To some extent,...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...es. For example, private school provide state of the art technology in the class rooms because k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03249920418 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8340455734 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349683122373 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129770848772 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748761808023 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236204196763 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658514143762 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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