A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes as mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Migration is a common feature that is happening right from the origin of living beings. All the species on Earth to migrate to different places based on their requirement. When human beings move and settle in another country, that country will be enhanced with more special and interesting factors and also develops in multiple ways. In my opinion, I agree that mixture of nationalities in a country provides several good effects.
There are a lot of interesting factors of having people from multiple nationalities in a country. Firstly, the nation will tend to become enriched with several cultures, so that people can choose the best among them and enhance their living. Secondly, there will be many festivals to celebrate like, Diwali, Christmas, Ramzan etc. Even though these festivals belong to different sects of people, they bring unity and tolerance among the citizens while celebrating together. Further more, it enables them to have peaceful co-existence. Thirdly, due to the coming of skilled resources, the country faces development in all aspects like agriculture, industries, service sectors etc. Finally, society is a combination of people with various culture and tradition, which is achieved when population from multiple nations settle in a country.
In contrast, there are also argument that allowing citizens from other nations to settle in a country may abolish the local culture, tradition and belief. For instance, when a group of people, following one religion settles in a country that follows another religion, they tend to influence the local people and convert them to their religion. But it is the personal interest of an individual to follow any religion or tradition.
To sum up, it is very healthy to have a mixed population from several nations in a country, in order to uplift the country's development and to have a lively environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faces'' or 'face's', 'fax's'?
Suggestion: faces'; face's; fax's
...oming of skilled resources, the country faces development in all aspects like agricul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24252491694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78262160009 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1940076743 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147785963732 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480482708355 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044726062646 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940317597455 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384118280653 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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