Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use reasons and examples to support your answer?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize? Agree or disagree?
Since the beginning of the last century, life has become intricate and technologically advanced which makes young people overwhelmed. Individual who want to control their life should equip themselves with skills and abilities. From personal intends, it is essential for young people to have the ability to paln and organize, given that they can achieve goals, promise best performance, and build up skills.
Firstly, palnning helps to achieve goals and crystallize objective. young people always posess grand dreams which may take years to accomplish. However, palninng ahead to these goals could effectively put them on the right trak and pervent their energy from being scattered or wasted. For example, Bill Gates one of the most prominent person I have ever seen, he had planned for his goals and became one of the most important leader of it field. Therefore, provided that young people plan for their ultimated goals, they could turn them into several achievable ones.
Next, coupled with crystallize objective, promise best performance is the second reason for the importance of planning and organizing. planning helps to anticipate all possibilities and arrange things in a scientific order. Thus, people feel assured and less stress. For example, students who stick with a study plan are more likely to have better performance than those who crams for tests. Conseuqently, onganizing is a key to have best performance in most occasions.
Finally, in order to build up skills, young people should have the ability to paln and organize. A survey conducted by experts from Oxford University showed that lots of elites gained several skills such as independence and confidence throughout palnning for decades later at young age. As a result, having several skills is an influencial factor to success.
taking everthing into a consideration, without a doubt the ability to paln and organize is essential for young people. it is sugessted that schoold design a learning activity to teach student how to plan and organize for their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24641833811 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72750474018 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575931232092 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1502965589 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.55 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0453650782382 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161756989784 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185804314494 0.0737576698707 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251869463499 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126304351528 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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