News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than mere words.
Some would argue that news and information displayed on televisions and newspapers or magazines that were accompanied with images or graphics are usually more efficient than mere texts and I totally support this school of thought because it makes it very captivating and creates a 'mental model' on the recipients minds.
Firstly, adding graphics to stories on news medias makes it very interesting aside the fact that it is also esthetically pleasing. It draws the attention of the individual and makes it less boring. A recent research shows that people reacts more positively to any information with images and bring out their curiosity. For example, using a celebrity in an advert will definitely makes anybody wants to listen to what the advertisement is all about. A very good example is using a popular actress, 'Mary Sledge' popularly known as Joyce in a 'Family planning advertisement'.
Secondly, adding a related graphics to stories on Television and daily newspapers also creates a 'mental model' on individual minds. People relate better with pictures. We are in an era of information explosion, there are just too much information to process. Also, seeing pictures enables us to decide which stories are worth divulging because we can priorities. For instance, a recent survey about which educational program does students watch most in Japan, reveals that, a numeral educational program tops the chart because images were used to teach numbers and their operations and not the conventional method of memorization. In the program intersecting strokes of lines were used to teach a multiplication which makes it very interesting and easy to understand.
In my opinion, I believe the use of graphics is essential in news and publications because of the obvious advantages of creating more awareness and efficiency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
...he individual and makes it less boring. A recent research shows that people reacts more positivel...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... celebrity in an advert will definitely makes anybody wants to listen to what the adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28178694158 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98286141828 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2008665516 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176636769492 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058166224503 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056109465621 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109466651226 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514208605955 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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