The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity issues are making things complicated for health institutions. In order to control this scenario, a significant number of individuals believe that the superlative way to solve such problems is to incorporate more sports classes in the school syllabus. Although, physical education will prevail the youngsters from obesity issues by doing regular exercise. I am of the opinion, that awareness and intake of a proper diet in this modern world is necessary to get rid of fatness problems.
However, food intake has a major role to play in the fitness of an individual. These day’s people eat junk foods which are high in calories and cause problems for them, especially young generations and the students who stay alone. Ready-made food available in the market save the time of these learners in cooking, consequently, they prefer to eat ready-to-eat meals and neglect the concept of healthy food while staying away from home. Therefore, awareness of food consumption is necessary to avoid fitness issues in the future.
On the other hand, an increase in physical lessons will force people to do exercise on a regular basis, which latter will benefit society by having more physically fit people. The addition of physical lessons in the school system will involve more and more people to acquire knowledge of sports and exercise. For instance, physical education learning by all the students irrespective of their background will boost the momentum between young individuals and open more career options for them.
In conclusion, while sports classes will involve more students in school learning and benefits them in terms of their fitness level. Whereas, control of diet intake and consumption of food in the right manner is more important to have more healthy individuals in society. Hence, I believe that awareness of diet limits is a better way to improve the graph of the health care system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sports classes in the school syllabus. Although, physical education will prevail the yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19417475728 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72938545018 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7255623481 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188601207067 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682082095547 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490820234645 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114430002094 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470728798995 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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