Some companies sponsor sport as way to advertise themselves. Some people thing it is good, while others thing there are disadvantages to this. Discuss Bothe sides and give your opinion.
Sport is the most common activity among all individuals around the world. Many companies therefore, do their best to sponsor them in regard to advertise themselves. Some people believe that it's very useful for sportsmen. In contrast, many other individuals see it has plethora of negative impacts. This essay will discuss both views in further detail before coming to the conclusion.
Firstly, with no doubt companies's sponsorships for any sport activity participate in increasing the popularity of it. For instance, Al-Hilal Sport Club is one of Saudi Arabia football clubs who got a huge attention form plenty of local and international companies such like STC Saudi Telecom Company and Pepsi. This great coverage, help them to hire more foreign international players who came from west clubs as well as allow them to arrange some various international friendship matches in terms to elevate the popularity rate of the club. Secondly, private sponsors also ensure players's fitness and stamina in very high level. Al-Nasser Sport Club had been suffering from very weak players's stamina. This poor fitness has impacted on their results. Therefore, they resorted to international couch in terms of providing the latest trainings technique. The results were amazing, after very bad performance last session, today they are on the top 3 clubs across Saudi Arabia. Finally, companies might introduce their valuable services or covey specific messages for their community. Barcelona's logo between 2011 to 2016 for example was the UNISAFE organization logo. This organization helps many people especially refugees to enhance their lives. Moreover it provides many vital health advices for lots of individuals globally.
On the flip side, companies's sponsorships might have some drawbacks. To begin with imbalance sponsorship which means that it's only provided for certain type of sport. To illustrate, it's irrefutable that most of companies are looking for lucrative investment. Thus, they only targeting some sports which have very high rate review like football, tennis and basketball, and they ignore other sport like balling just because of the review rate. This might demotivate those who're playing such unpopular sports and dragged them quit it. Then, most of companies enforce or attract some famous players to do some promotional videos for particular items. This issue is widespread nowadays and it affect players performance. Ronaldinho as an example was very talented players, he was playing in many well known clubs such like Barcelona, Ice Milan, Inter Milan. However, by huge number of advertisement session he lost his talent because of such distraction.
In conclusion, although companies are only looking for profitability and cover specific kind of sport, companies in my point of view, have a conspicuous leverage on evolving many sport sectors globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2453.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53724604966 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93061380366 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602708803612 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5846440436 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3461538462 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0384615385 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190118091227 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515216862648 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414463657638 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131518325829 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513497917421 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.