Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults.
Why is this?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development
Young blood are often found addicted to shopping in order to kill their time or to utilise their spare time. This scenario has no variation in developed as well as developing countries. This essay will discuss the possible causes and how it has negatively influenced the development.
There are two main causes for such activity. First one is improvement in standard of living, which have surplused the purchasing power and increment in disposable income. And secondly, technological advancements. This have opened enormous deals and offers options to allure young minds. It is often observed that flash sales on Myntra and Flipkart online websites frequently lubricantes the young earning professional to spend certain part of their income on shopping things that they might desire but they are barely their necessity.
There have been negative progression because of this act. This is because individuals critically end up purchasing unessential stuff which in a way increases chances of indebtedness. Furthermore, it have led to an unsatisfied community because many personals are obsessed to buy certain things just to show off their social standard irrespective of its expenditure. For instance, numerous adults make up their mind for purchasing the object which is way out of their league in order to show off. This ultimately leds to compounding debts and depressing lifestyle.
To recapitulate, shopping can definitely be obsession for young professionals but it is necessary to maintain a safeguard because excess of anything is deleterious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...hances of indebtedness. Furthermore, it have led to an unsatisfied community because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47302904564 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04654751574 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634854771784 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1384949232 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195068260022 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692577461901 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438463832833 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117446310761 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337179536372 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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