Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Physical activity is essential to stay fit and to lead a healthy life. Many full-time working professionals facing health issues due to no or less amount of exercise in their leisure time. Firstly, this essay will discuss the working people who do not spend time in exercise. Secondly, this essay will discuss to overcome this problem.
First of all, it is well-known that many people especially in cities not performing any physical training due to over-commitment to their work. Might be some job demands to spend extra time in work. Due to this fact, obesity is one of the growing issues in IT industries. To prove that, Anna University had done many surveys on overweight issues and the result shows that 80% of software engineers are extra weight, on a flip side only 20% of them maintaining an ideal weight. Many specialists from medical field stated that obesity is the first step and it may lead to different other issues like depression, cancer, etc.
Secondly, by following the right lifestyle and intake of proper diet will overcome these problems. For instance, people who do farming they stay fit because some form of physical activity is required where IT professional sit in front of computers for hours. The organization should come up with mandatory exercise training program for its employees. Also, they should conduct and encourage sports and yoga events. Awareness videos should be telecasts and health-related sessions should be conducted.
To conclude, the following videos and guidelines may help to lead a healthy life however it is personal accountability to balance the exercise regime and work responsibilities to avoid health issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ofessionals facing health issues due to no or less amount of exercise in their lei...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discuss overcoming'.
Suggestion: discuss overcoming
... in exercise. Secondly, this essay will discuss to overcome this problem. First of all, it is w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17712177122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82825381131 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7600483901 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281211058009 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835834343941 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770187807752 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159577991261 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858600797581 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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