As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology plays a vital role in our modern society, nearly everyone in some way or another engages with technological items on a daily basis. With the advent of modern technology, there have been numerous innovations such as the computer, cellular phones, and even the more complex machine learning oriented aspects, such as artificial intelligence, among others. Over the years, there has been an over dependence on technology for conducting our everyday activities, both domestically and professionally, and we as humans are able to adapt and assimilate ourselves into these technological items, where we are in fact learning more and are able to access more from it in problem solving environments, rather than it having deleterious effects on our thinking capabilities.
Numerous fields and occupations utilize technology to combat various issues or to improve expected outcomes. For instance, with the development of Google Maps, individuals are able to navigate their way to uncharted territories from their very cell-phone, without having to rely on a large map which might be time-consuming in nature. The application, allows the user to not only navigate the best path in terms of length, but also tracks the path with the least traffic to save time. So if one is stuck in a particular junction or an unknown region, they can surely depend upon this application to aid them from getting lost. In such a manner, the user is able to solve his/her problem in not knowing where to go or how to go, given his/her current location, in finding the best possible path. In such situations one cannot possibly merely think for themselves and locate a way out, especially in an unknown area, and hence why the application becomes so important.
Furthermore, another instance is through space exploration, with greater advancements in telescopes and observatories, astronomers are able to analyse and explore the vastness of the universe, without having to rely on dated charts and theoretical observations. They can pinpoint and observe the various stars, analyse astronomical phenomenon with greater detail such as the explosion of a supernova, and even with higher resolution cameras coming into the fore, scientists can capture and study the shape and structure of various celestial objects. In such a manner, technology has not only improved the accuracy and provided evidence for various aspects in the universe, but has also facilitated this and provided scientists the ability to conduct more investigations and explorations, to help us better understand the universe.
Additionally, we may also consider the case of online education, where individuals are given the ability to learn and receive an education through a more affordable medium. Instead of having to spend an exorbitant amount of money in attending an on-campus facility, individuals can hope to achieve the same skill-sets and abilities required for the workforce, from an online platform, which not only places less debt on them in terms of financing and funding, but also provides them with the flexibility to engage in other hobbies, since classes are conducted as per the individual’s availability. This also makes it easier for individuals who are already working, to study part-time from an online platform and achieve a degree in the process.
In such events, we can see that technology has played a vital role in the growth and development of its users, but we must not ignore the downsides of technology in the process. By making access to information easily available, and by making our lives easier through cars and dishwashers, individuals are becoming lazier in the process, which can have negative effects on their health. Furthermore, an over-dependence on technology to function, can allow individuals to become addicted, to say social media platforms like Facebook or to Video Games, which not only wastes time but also hampers their ability to think due to the opportunity cost of time. However, in conclusion, given these negative aspects of technology, individuals who are able to curb and limit themselves with greater self-discipline and willpower can see the benefits of technology in enhancing and improving their thinking capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 110.0 58.6224719101 188% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3579.0 2235.4752809 160% => OK
No of words: 672.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32589285714 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09145979004 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0679020539 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497023809524 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1166.4 704.065955056 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 20.0 4.38483146067 456% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0662769148 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.368421053 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3684210526 23.4991977007 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169455548193 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529580480388 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317420194561 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098347071466 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260571688438 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 190.0 100.480337079 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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