Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on the campus. Do you think that is a positive or negative development?
From the last decade, technology has become so advanced and cheaper therefore, radical change has being observed in the field of study. Few universities provide online curriculum to their pupils instead of taking classes on campus. However, it will have both merits as well as demerits which are being discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To start with the advantages, first and foremost would be on children's development. By this I mean that, student will get and learn courses easily without going to school. Consequently, this will saves the time and money of the candidates therefore they can spend their more time behind education by being in the home. Moreover, learners will concentrate on their academic work without being interrupted or disturbed by others. To expand it, School-child who gets irritated by the noise of people will be able to complete their practice and preparation in calm, silent and healthy atmosphere of house.
Examining the disadvantages, first, such situation would increase the ratio of unemployment in the area of coaching as there will be no physical teaching anymore in colleges and institutions. Apart from this, academicians will face scarcity of knowledge as there will be no one to solve their queries. If lectures should be taken in physically then, pupils can ask questions that they don't understand. Furthermore, this step will also harmful for child-students as they would get addicted to mobiles and it will cause some serious effect on their eyes and sometimes cause headache too.
To conclude the topic, I would say that despite of having pros for students, it is still unnecessary for them. As it also cause many bad effect on children's career and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, apart from, i mean, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18050541516 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82382016103 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9600353756 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0388014824382 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172834187702 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464682578927 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0280090366581 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348116312724 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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