Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The educational curriculum has always been a subject of controversial debate. recently, the majority of people prefer to study practical subjects compared to their theoretical counterpart, therefore, universities are inclined to omit the theoretical coursed from their syllabus. I strongly disagree with this issue and will discuss the matter throughout this essay.
Considering the intense economic and financial situation of the middle classes of the society these days, a tendency towards the practicality of education is natural. People try to monetize their knowledge as soon and as efficient as possible. It is starkly obvious that a person suffering from constant hunger or inability to pay the high cost of medical treatments tends to pursue a more practical profession and education.
On the other hand, the importance of theoretical sciences cannot be disregarded as they are the thrust of science and knowledge. If universities decide to remove the theoretical studies from their agenda, the human race will struggle with expanding the horizons of science. It is crucial to invest in our scientific understanding of the universe, which means that we have to embrace the theoretical studies as well. As an instance of this, many countries which focused on practical knowledge have suffered from intellectual inadequacies among their population, which in turn has a detrimental effect all around.
To conclude, while we cannot overlook the necessities of the average person's daily life, which dictates practicality, it is of utmost importance not to abandon theoretical education as it is the main derive of scientific discoveries. If universities focus solely on practical education, in a short span of time there will be numerous negative issues dragging the human intellect down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
...been a subject of controversial debate. recently, the majority of people prefer to study...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52536231884 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11547645662 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3812262717 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200784470176 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697454115194 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546844638039 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118500869991 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584193626138 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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