In recent years, more and more people choosing to read e books rather than paper books do the advantageous outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, more and more people choosing to read e books rather than paper books do the advantageous outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary era, a few individual are preferred to read online materials as compared to hardware copy. I will discuss the merits outweigh the demerits in this essay.

To commence with, a discovery of internet provide a portable drive file to mankind. As a consequence, people will have garnered profound knowledge about world at anywhere; anytime. Another one is that, software materials have assisted to humanbeings because it is source of affordable. Owing to this, every student are acquired education in the world. The best epitome of this is the Cambridge university conducted survey and found that 80% children have been utilized electronic books for study rather than text material.

Despite having a few drawbacks of selecting e- books in life whether paperbooks. First and foremost point is, it distracts the children to study especially, young one and they are started chat with amiables; listen music whenever, who have consumed internet service. Due to this reason, future of pupils is spoiled by electronic books. A good illustration of this is in India and China majority of offspring run a internet for knowledge but who hunted by social media; and start to play hazards game such as: blue game and then those are taken step of suicide. Hence, read a hand written books it is beneficial for infant.

By considering the both sides, I believe that positive point of electronic material is more rather than text books negative point. Today, people prefer to advantageous of online service such as ; cheaper and easily accessible in the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dia and China majority of offspring run a internet for knowledge but who hunted b...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er and easily accessible in the world.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15234375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72525249579 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5338089608 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165285602364 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513693068336 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605920765658 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102845407341 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655359289416 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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