Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?
The performers from the entertainment world have a special place in people's hearts. This essay disagrees with the opinion that scientists and technology experts have a better reputation than artists and will explain the reasons with facts in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, people are leading a stressful life due to tight competition in the workplace. Therefore, to get instant relief from stress, people choose various modes of the entertainment such as performances of singers, dancers, actors and actresses from either musical albums or films, which leads to an increase in the fan following of these artists. For instance, the latest report published in Bollywood News, reveals that one hit movie of a Bollywood star can increase his/her Twitter followers by a two-fold. Thus, people enjoy visual treats provided by artists more than scientific inventions. Necessity
A Luxurious lifestyle is another reason that entices the common crowd to admire celebrities. The young generation can catch minute details about their favourite actors like branded clothing, eating habits, freestyle shopping because these actors get attention from worldwide media and their life is not so private that is why the youth take inspiration from these people. For example, a survey conducted in public schools of Bangalore in 2018 showed that around 60 per cent of children consider Bollywood stars as their role models and would like to be their replica in adulthood.
In conclusion, people give more attention to musicians and artists because their work helps the public to boost the mood in stress like situations. Being a public figure, these people give new goals to teenagers in terms of lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re than scientific inventions. Necessity A Luxurious lifestyle is another reason ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38202247191 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71192602712 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.454122901 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822090946581 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313033148719 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378720133195 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538676489424 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300454581223 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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