Young people are much aware of and concerm about issues like the environment poverty and animal well-fare than previous generations. What is your opinion?
Nowadays concertation about some problems related to the environment and animal have been changed by new generation of age specially for young people. Personally, I think this fact is true for many factors.
By developing technology society is faced by explosion of information these days. state-of art devices have been increased among of people like young people. Moreover, accessibility for collection of information have been easily for individuals.it causes that, youth follow first-hand information and having news what happened about environment. In London, for instance, statistics have been shown 15% of individuals between 15 and 30 by being in social media like Instagram and Facebook share latest news about environment, poverty which push the authorizes try to solve that.
From long time ago, Mass media from around the world inform people about principle of sustaining the earth for next generation of people. /30 min/ TV and newspaper are main resource of that and it counted as second medias which have reflected setback of environment. However, it never comes instead of internet. To complete these aspects, it can mention children that always have been in the house and consume many TV shows program which design for reshape their personality.
Another reason that can play important role for youth’s knowledge is that, Schools and universities one of the main places for them that teacher tries to prepare these range of age group to avoid an action against animals and other creatures who lives in nature. For Example, in oxford university in second year of bachelor, student must study some module about the natural resources
In conclusion, in the 21th century knowledge of computer has been raised which individuals between 15 and 25 involved many supplies of information like internet. Though traditional ways for example TV, Newspaper and educational system was alternative for them.
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| 2019-07-14 | amir_gha67 | 76 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38870431894 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79912901322 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1223065856 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930163221705 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357804972281 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425127585089 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547560145167 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342847600008 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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